Fritz’s First Paragraph

I don’t love the writing part of Shurley English as time goes on, but for now I am using it with Fritz (we’ll switch to IEW probably in the fall). Yesterday, Fritz wrote his first paragraph. It was a two-point paragraph on the topic of favorite colors. He told me he has never written so much at once in his life and he didn’t really enjoy it.

Paragraph

My Favorite Colors

People have so many favorite colors. My favorite colors are red and blue. I am starting to like red. Red is a bit pretty because it is on rubies. I have always liked blue. Since water is blue it is my favorite color. I think red and blue are pretty nice colors.

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